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Old 08-25-2008, 05:50 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Cousin & boyfriend

Lovely dovely out in the open air. no extra light not even an external flitser, only the sun.














I know there not perfect, but if there are any tips on how to use the sunlight better please

I don't own any studio lights yet so I depend on the sunlight loads.

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Wonderfull job. You captured there emotion nicely.
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you could reflect light into there eyes to get some sparkle in there
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They make a good-looking couple

I like most of the poses, with #5 love playfulness but I do not like leaf between them, and with #3 his hand seems to a little low maybe if he was play with her hair more up near the neck or ear
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Old 08-26-2008, 03:24 AM   #5 (permalink)
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thanks guys

Indeed the sparkel is a good idea! i'll pay more atention to that the next time!

and the leaf I know it was very hard to follow them because they where in constant movement. That is why I believe the poses don't look so 'posed' they never sat still one second

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