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09-03-2008, 03:16 PM
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Saint Nicholas
So here goes my first shot on here. It is HDR and was shot in colour but turned it into a mono colour shot (not black and white but this was the most appropriate section for it I think)
Some constructive criticism is what I would like.   ::EDITED:: Last edited by Redxibi; 09-04-2008 at 02:22 AM. Reason: Improved photo |
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09-03-2008, 06:23 PM
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Mean, Green, and Seventeen
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I really like the tones and the composition of this shot. However, I am not really digging the slight haloing along the top of the leftmost building segment. This slight haloing aside, the shot is really nice. Good work. Just try and keep that haloing under control.
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09-03-2008, 09:49 PM
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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i like how the stone is lighter on the dome. it really draws your attention and keeps you from drifting out of frame. as said before, try to clean up the halo.
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09-04-2008, 02:22 AM
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Thanks for the criticism. I updated it and now it looks better.
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