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spiffybeth · 09-11-2008, 08:26 AM

candid street shot at NC State.

c/c please!

JohnMF · 09-11-2008, 07:50 PM

nice composition

is this a stealth advertisement for thewolfweb though?

Harmony · 09-14-2008, 04:44 PM

I couldn't help it... I looked the website up. It's not naughty... it looks like... a school forum?

As for the photo: have you tried other tints other than blue? Reddish or brown, maybe?

ChrisOquist · 09-14-2008, 05:14 PM

I like it, very natural (not surprising, since it's a candid, but you captured the right moment) body language in the subjects. I would probably up the contrast a little bit and do some ever-so-slight spot-sharpening of the girls. Pleasing shot, though.

Hawaii Five-O · 09-15-2008, 12:32 AM

I would change the blue tint to another tint like Sepia, but if you like the blue, thats whats important.

Battou · 09-15-2008, 12:37 AM

Quote: Originally Posted by C677T

I would change the blue tint to another tint like Sepia, but if you like the blue, thats whats important.

I agree with that completely.

spiffybeth · 09-15-2008, 02:59 PM

Quote: Originally Posted by JohnMF

nice composition

is this a stealth advertisement for thewolfweb though?

haha, thanks!
thewolfweb was just something that happened to be in the picture and was not intentional.

Quote: Originally Posted by Harmony

I couldn't help it... I looked the website up. It's not naughty... it looks like... a school forum?

As for the photo: have you tried other tints other than blue? Reddish or brown, maybe?

ill give other tints a go. when i first edited this, i didnt realize id made it so blue, but then i rather liked the blue so i posted it. i have another go at it later on. thanks!

Quote: Originally Posted by ChrisOquist

I like it, very natural (not surprising, since it's a candid, but you captured the right moment) body language in the subjects. I would probably up the contrast a little bit and do some ever-so-slight spot-sharpening of the girls. Pleasing shot, though.

thanks for the kind words and feedback!

Quote: Originally Posted by C677T

I would change the blue tint to another tint like Sepia, but if you like the blue, thats whats important.

yep, ill give it a go. thanks!

Quote: Originally Posted by Battou

I agree with that completely.

lostprophet · 09-15-2008, 03:02 PM

for the love of god, keep it as it is!!

Hawaii Five-O · 09-15-2008, 10:47 PM

The blu dosen't look terrible though, maybe the mid tones just need adjusted a little

hmm that blond girl on the right has nice hair

spiffybeth · 09-17-2008, 12:16 PM

how's this? better? worse?

lostprophet · 09-17-2008, 12:21 PM

its nice but blue is better

joecoulsonphotography · 09-17-2008, 12:24 PM

That is much more pleasing to my eyes. Blue one is too harsh for the scene IMHO.

Harmony · 09-17-2008, 07:19 PM

Oooo! Oooo! Better! I like it a lot...

kundalini · 09-17-2008, 07:28 PM

+1 for the blue.

Gives a sense of the cold, harsh reality of life and nothing warm is coming out of that conversation with 4 girls.

#4 is out of frame, dummy.

09-11-2008, 08:26 AM	#1 (permalink)
spiffybeth TPF Junkie! Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: NJ Posts: 3,339 My Photos Are OK to Edit	girls candid street shot at NC State. c/c please! __________________ I've got a bike You can ride it if you like

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Harmony TPF Junkie! Join Date: May 2007 Location: BC Posts: 1,156 My Photos Are OK to Edit	I couldn't help it... I looked the website up. It's not naughty... it looks like... a school forum? As for the photo: have you tried other tints other than blue? Reddish or brown, maybe? __________________ TPF has a Mentoring Program. Blog \| Portfolio \| Vancouver Muralist and Faux Finisher

09-14-2008, 05:14 PM	#4 (permalink)
ChrisOquist I spend too much of my life on TPF! Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Boston, MA Posts: 284 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit	I like it, very natural (not surprising, since it's a candid, but you captured the right moment) body language in the subjects. I would probably up the contrast a little bit and do some ever-so-slight spot-sharpening of the girls. Pleasing shot, though. __________________ Chris www.aperculture.com

09-15-2008, 12:32 AM	#5 (permalink)
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09-15-2008, 12:37 AM	#6 (permalink)
Battou TPF Junkie! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Slapamonkey, New York Posts: 6,057 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit	Quote: Originally Posted by C677T I would change the blue tint to another tint like Sepia, but if you like the blue, thats whats important. I agree with that completely. __________________ Can't understand Deviant Art? Click banner for PL main site click here for my PL Gallery

09-15-2008, 02:59 PM	#7 (permalink)
spiffybeth TPF Junkie! Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: NJ Posts: 3,339 My Photos Are OK to Edit	Quote: Originally Posted by JohnMF nice composition is this a stealth advertisement for thewolfweb though? haha, thanks! thewolfweb was just something that happened to be in the picture and was not intentional. Quote: Originally Posted by Harmony I couldn't help it... I looked the website up. It's not naughty... it looks like... a school forum? As for the photo: have you tried other tints other than blue? Reddish or brown, maybe? ill give other tints a go. when i first edited this, i didnt realize id made it so blue, but then i rather liked the blue so i posted it. i have another go at it later on. thanks! Quote: Originally Posted by ChrisOquist I like it, very natural (not surprising, since it's a candid, but you captured the right moment) body language in the subjects. I would probably up the contrast a little bit and do some ever-so-slight spot-sharpening of the girls. Pleasing shot, though. thanks for the kind words and feedback! Quote: Originally Posted by C677T I would change the blue tint to another tint like Sepia, but if you like the blue, thats whats important. yep, ill give it a go. thanks! Quote: Originally Posted by Battou I agree with that completely. __________________ I've got a bike You can ride it if you like

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09-15-2008, 10:47 PM	#9 (permalink)
Hawaii Five-O I spend too much of my life on TPF! Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 702 My Photos Are OK to Edit	The blu dosen't look terrible though, maybe the mid tones just need adjusted a little hmm that blond girl on the right has nice hair __________________ Flickr photos My Blogg

09-17-2008, 12:16 PM	#10 (permalink)
spiffybeth TPF Junkie! Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: NJ Posts: 3,339 My Photos Are OK to Edit	how's this? better? worse? __________________ I've got a bike You can ride it if you like

09-17-2008, 12:21 PM	#11 (permalink)
lostprophet has a new camera TPF Subscriber Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Reading UK - just follow the signs to Purgatory and take the 3rd exit on the left Posts: 11,247 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit	its nice but blue is better __________________ Pick your pockets full of sorrow And run away with me tomorrow Equipment List: pair of boots, some trousers, loads of t-shirts and some jackets, got an iPod as well and a phone! some DVD's and books, oh mustn't forget my big woolly socks for when its cold, even got a TPF torch for winning POTM but never got my second one

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joecoulsonphotography Site Tranquilizer TPF Subscriber Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: GA - USA Posts: 143 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit	That is much more pleasing to my eyes. Blue one is too harsh for the scene IMHO. __________________ www.joecoulsonphotography.com

09-17-2008, 07:19 PM	#13 (permalink)
Harmony TPF Junkie! Join Date: May 2007 Location: BC Posts: 1,156 My Photos Are OK to Edit	Oooo! Oooo! Better! I like it a lot... __________________ TPF has a Mentoring Program. Blog \| Portfolio \| Vancouver Muralist and Faux Finisher

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09-17-2008, 07:28 PM	#14 (permalink)
kundalini Fits of Uncontrollable Laughter TPF Subscriber Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: State of Confusion Posts: 4,999 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit	+1 for the blue. Gives a sense of the cold, harsh reality of life and nothing warm is coming out of that conversation with 4 girls. #4 is out of frame, dummy. __________________ You drag it around like a ball and chain You wallow in the guilt; you wallow in the pain You wave it like a flag, you wear it like a crown Got your mind in the gutter, bringin’ everybody down Bitch about the present and blame it on the past I’d like to find your inner child and kick it’s little ass Eagles / Get Over It / Hell Freezes Over (1994)

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