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Join Date: May 2005
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Here's a shot I did some weeks ago at the local kindergarten.
Natural light, flash off, handheld. She's waiting for recess-time at the door to the playground. ![]() A tighter crop of her face and hand. Pretty girl, isn't she? ![]() Thanks for looking. Thank you even more if you let me know what you think.
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Join Date: Jul 2005
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I love it, but it needed about two stops more exposure and the bright area at camera right is distracting. The eye is drawn to the largest area of contrast in a photograph. If that area is not the subject you have lost the impact of the image.
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Thank you, Tally Ho, for your feedback.
Do you think this version works better? ![]() Everyone elses ideas are welcome, too, of course.
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