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invisible · 07-02-2009, 06:27 PM

f/25 @ 75 mm, 0.4s, ISO 200

Thanks for looking.

jamagica · 07-02-2009, 06:54 PM

it's quite a set of simplicity, but you took it and made it into something. Is that hair or grass at the bottom of the door?

No doubt this is great

TriniPhototakeoutta · 07-02-2009, 07:55 PM

very simple, clean shot. hmmm........i like. Simplicity.

Dcrymes84 · 07-02-2009, 09:17 PM

Wow you had me fooled i thought it was a picture of a man carrying his bride through the door. You got me good.But its a great pic im liking it.

Rere · 07-03-2009, 09:09 AM

Nice lines. I think I might like it better if it all were in focus. Also wonder how a bit more contrast would affect it.

invisible · 07-04-2009, 08:17 AM

Quote: Originally Posted by jamagica

Is that hair or grass at the bottom of the door?

It's just grass. They don't make hair that thick anymore

Quote: Originally Posted by Rere

I think I might like it better if it all were in focus. Also wonder how a bit more contrast would affect it.

Yes, the goal was for all of it to be in focus (notice the f/25 aperture). I focused on the door frame, yet I should've focused somewhere on the floor instead. Good idea about increasing the contrast.

Thanks everybody for your feedback.

beni_hung · 07-04-2009, 08:18 AM

Nice photo!

henrycooke · 07-04-2009, 08:31 AM

loving the focus and comp

Dagwood56 · 07-04-2009, 09:17 AM

Excellent! I love the lines and angles. I agree that maybe a bit more contrast might add to it though.

Sachphotography · 07-04-2009, 10:26 PM

It's different.
I like it.

invisible · 07-05-2009, 05:46 PM

Thanks beni, henry, Carol and Daniel!

Soujiro · 07-06-2009, 04:13 PM

I like this picture. So many shapes and lines!

Only my eyes constantly look to the top-middle of the picture. It's hard to take in the whole picture.

invisible · 07-06-2009, 08:54 PM

Quote: Originally Posted by Soujiro

I like this picture. So many shapes and lines!

Only my eyes constantly look to the top-middle of the picture. It's hard to take in the whole picture.

Thanks, Soujiro. Considering the direction of the leading lines on the bottom, I don't think your eyes have an alternative: you're going to look to the top middle, want it or not

(By the way, there's a door to the right

)

DSPhotography · 07-06-2009, 10:41 PM

I think the contrast is just fine on the door and wall.. but yeah, there's almost none on the floor and it looks washed out in that area.

Overall I like it =)

invisible · 07-11-2009, 10:47 PM

Thanks, DS

07-02-2009, 06:27 PM	#1
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07-02-2009, 07:55 PM	#3
TriniPhototakeoutta I spend too much of my life on TPF! Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Trinidad & Tobago, West Indies Posts: 358 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts My Gallery: (0)	very simple, clean shot. hmmm........i like. Simplicity. __________________ Equipment: Nikon D60 \| Nikon 18-55mm VR Kit lens \| Nikon 55-200mm VR Zoom lens Other Equipment: Targus TGT-66TR Tripod Everyone has a photographic memory. Some don't have film. - Stephen Wright

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Rere I spend too much of my life on TPF! Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In NC, but currently my husband and I are workcamping In Branson MO Posts: 321 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post My Gallery: (0)	Nice lines. I think I might like it better if it all were in focus. Also wonder how a bit more contrast would affect it. __________________ http://www.photographyandartbyrita.com/

07-04-2009, 08:17 AM	#6
invisible TPF Junkie! Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 2,725 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts My Gallery: (0)	Quote: Originally Posted by jamagica Is that hair or grass at the bottom of the door? It's just grass. They don't make hair that thick anymore Quote: Originally Posted by Rere I think I might like it better if it all were in focus. Also wonder how a bit more contrast would affect it. Yes, the goal was for all of it to be in focus (notice the f/25 aperture). I focused on the door frame, yet I should've focused somewhere on the floor instead. Good idea about increasing the contrast. Thanks everybody for your feedback. __________________ I'm gone with the wind. Sayonara! Federico Referral code: 4XD-5VV-39P (Full disclosure: You save $5, I save $5 too.)

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jamagica Been spending a lot of time on here! Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 153 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	it's quite a set of simplicity, but you took it and made it into something. Is that hair or grass at the bottom of the door? No doubt this is great

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Dagwood56 TPF Junkie! Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Berks County Pennsylvania Posts: 1,361 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 26 Times in 26 Posts My Gallery: (0)	Excellent! I love the lines and angles. I agree that maybe a bit more contrast might add to it though. __________________ Carol ________________________ You should live for today, for yesterday is already gone and tomorrow may never come. __________________________

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Soujiro TPF Noob! Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 20 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	I like this picture. So many shapes and lines! Only my eyes constantly look to the top-middle of the picture. It's hard to take in the whole picture. __________________

07-06-2009, 08:54 PM	#13
invisible TPF Junkie! Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 2,725 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts My Gallery: (0)	Quote: Originally Posted by Soujiro I like this picture. So many shapes and lines! Only my eyes constantly look to the top-middle of the picture. It's hard to take in the whole picture. Thanks, Soujiro. Considering the direction of the leading lines on the bottom, I don't think your eyes have an alternative: you're going to look to the top middle, want it or not (By the way, there's a door to the right ) __________________ I'm gone with the wind. Sayonara! Federico Referral code: 4XD-5VV-39P (Full disclosure: You save $5, I save $5 too.)

07-06-2009, 10:41 PM	#14
DSPhotography Been spending a lot of time on here! Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Augusta, GA Posts: 125 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts My Gallery: (0)	I think the contrast is just fine on the door and wall.. but yeah, there's almost none on the floor and it looks washed out in that area. Overall I like it =) __________________ My Equipment Nikon N75 Sigma 28-70mm f2.8 pro lens Sigma 90-300mm f3.5 lens Tiffen filters Ilford Delta and Fuji Reala film

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