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  1. 01-30-2012 09:41 AM #1
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    Seagulls

    This pic was taken a few winters ago in Hoboken, NJ

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    You were really unlucky to be on this side.......

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    I like it.

    You might improve it by cropping it to square format. To me, a lot of that area behind the gulls detracts attention from the subject.

    That railing in the background seems to be off-level, but the horizon and everything else in the picture seem to be right. I don't know what to make of that. Is the railing really not level, or is it maybe an effect of the lens you were using?

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    The rail was on a small incline and I was standing at the lower end of it. The only thing that I can see that is distracting is the 2 signs. Thanks for your input!
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    My eyes go straight to the background. I would crop the railing before it bends, giving the railing the impression that it goes on forever.
    Like this
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    MRME thanks... I really like what you did to the photo.
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