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[hossfly1]

would like some critique if anyone has the time

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[timor]

Not much to critique, only that DoF insufficient. Overall compo is not telling any story.

[KenC]

I think it would work because the wheel and the way it's lit are interesting, but the out-of-focus plants in front of it in the center and right of the image are too distracting.

[Rick58]

Well, as usual it seems, I disagree and really like this.
Old, Industrial macho steel and iron. That's the only story I need from this picture. I even like the weeds. Shows abandonment and neglect.
To me, this is a very cool photo

[tirediron]

It's not bad, but a wider crop with more DoF would make for a stronger image IMO.

[cgipson1]

^This.... too tightly framed. Having it all sharp would improve the shot immensely.