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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
color help, please
Hi all,
I could really use some help with this one... The color seems off to me, but I can't quite put my finger on the problem. It seems as if anything I do to it makes things worse. Any thoughts? I would also love to hear any other feedback on any other issues. I've got my hard hat on, so feel free to skip any sugar coating and let me hear the unvarnished truth. 

original (just converted to jpg and sized for web):

Thank you all so much!
~jen
Do what you can, with what you have, where you are.
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06-16-2007 06:29 PM
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Well after looking at the original I think you did a good job on your edit. You might find someone else who can help more in the editing department but for what I see I think it looks good!
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The only thing that stands out to my eye is that she has pink on, pink lipstick, a bit of pink rouge, and he has a naturally pinkish/reddish complexion. So maybe you're looking at it like your reds are off?
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
Ok. I felt that their complexions were too red and splotchy. I have this problem too as I am very fair skinned.
I changed the reds some. See what you think.
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1146/...da745b.jpg?v=0
Last edited by Stretch Armstrong; 06-16-2007 at 09:42 PM.
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
Looks good!
Perhaps what your picking up on is not a problem with the colour so much as the fact that both of their set of eyes are in shadow... Just a thought.
Constructive C&C always welcome.
Shooting since 06/07 :-D
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
Thank you all for your time, comments, and edits. I appreciate it!
~jen
Do what you can, with what you have, where you are.
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No longer a newbie, moving up!
I think hyakuhei may be right about the problem being with the eyes beingg in shadow.