Fun with a tractor

[WDodd]

I live on a farm and my girlfriend is from the nearby town so she wanted to do a fun tractor shoot. I wanted you guys and gals to tell me what I did wrong.

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[Alpha]

You need a shallower DOF, and I would shoot when there's more light. Other than that, you're on the right track.

[Cero21]

Just wanted to say:
1) You have a hot gf (saw the bikini pics recently too)
2) I like your car

[Alpha]

Okay. This is the critique forum. Why don't you keep your coveting to yourself or via PM and add something constructive in your posts or keep your personal stuff in check.

[chrisburke]

Just wanted to say:
1) You have a hot gf (saw the bikini pics recently too)
2) I like your car

its a different person not the same girl... no tattoo... come on now, be observant, your a photographer...

[WDodd]

its a different person not the same girl... no tattoo... come on now, be observant, your a photographer...

Same girl, tattoo is there its just hidden. Fooled ya.


Thanks for the tips Max I will take them into account next time I shoot. As far as the light though, I thought the shade would be better than the direct sunlight. I used the large trees to block the sun so its "open shade."

[Alpha]

Damn. Think you could teach me how to move large trees?

[oldnavy170]

The only thing I see off is her leg is in a funny position in #2. Other then that I think these look good.

[bluettu]

I think it would be even more sexy with bare feet.

[sage95]

Something seems lost in the eyes to me. I know absolutly nothing about photographing models though but it seems to me that they should be brighter.