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Been spending a lot of time on here!
advice needed

Ideas on composition or lighting? Thanks in advance.
Last edited by tahmail; 06-22-2007 at 06:32 PM.
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06-22-2007 06:30 PM
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
i like it, but its a bit too bright,
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
Is this better?
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No longer a newbie, moving up!
Pretty good. Yes the second attaempt is better.
Composition is good as is DOF.
Possibly a little too much foreground, this will take the horizon away from the centre
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Looks a bit red to me. The slight tilt is kind of buggy too.
Pretty place.
Wanna have some fun? - Critique a critique.
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
I'll try one more. Tell me, 1,2 or 3.
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
here i edited it for you, at least it suits my tastes, hope you dont mind
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
What do you mean by "Adjust he curves" Nomad?
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
If you are using photoshop press Ctrl + M, here's a link that would explain it better...
http://www.cambridgeincolour.com/tut...hop-curves.htm
Did you like any of those 3 edits??
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
I prefer the 3rd one myself. Perhaps just because I like having more of the mountains in the shot.
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
Time of day has affected the lighting. As you see, that can be addressed if it is important to you. Personally, I would like for you to have pulled back a little. The panorama seems crowded on both sides.
Rusty Tripod
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I might as well throw my hat into the ring;
Wanna have some fun? - Critique a critique.