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    advice needed



    Ideas on composition or lighting? Thanks in advance.
    Last edited by tahmail; 06-22-2007 at 06:32 PM. Reason: error

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    i like it, but its a bit too bright,

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    Is this better?


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    Pretty good. Yes the second attaempt is better.
    Composition is good as is DOF.
    Possibly a little too much foreground, this will take the horizon away from the centre

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    Looks a bit red to me. The slight tilt is kind of buggy too.

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    I'll try one more. Tell me, 1,2 or 3.


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    here i edited it for you, at least it suits my tastes, hope you dont mind


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    You need to adjust the curves, here, a few tries...




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    What do you mean by "Adjust he curves" Nomad?

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    If you are using photoshop press Ctrl + M, here's a link that would explain it better...
    http://www.cambridgeincolour.com/tut...hop-curves.htm

    Did you like any of those 3 edits??

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    I prefer the 3rd one myself. Perhaps just because I like having more of the mountains in the shot.

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    Time of day has affected the lighting. As you see, that can be addressed if it is important to you. Personally, I would like for you to have pulled back a little. The panorama seems crowded on both sides.

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    I might as well throw my hat into the ring;

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