some patterns

[danielsmith4213]

I decided to take some simple black and white photos today... Simple patterns are just lovely

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[ocular]

They're both out of focus, unless your conveying a specific message (a good title along with the chocolate or branch) it falls flat for me.

[William Petruzzo]

The first one doesn't do much for me, but I really like the second. It's abstract, but not annoyingly so. I could see myself using it as a desktop image.

[Mark Saint]

i like both. very interesting

[danielsmith4213]

I can never seem to get my photos sharp enough, every single photo I take seems a little soft, Is it that I'm not taking enough time to focus the shots or could my lens/sensor be dirty or something? I also heard somewhere that every lens has an optimum aperture, is this true?

[Sachphotography]

Art= to each his own. I like them. Different and interesting.

[Dagwood56]

I like these, they are different, uncluttered and interesting. And you'll probbaly find, with shots like these that are more artisitic and abstract, the opinions will be spilt.

[danielsmith4213]

thanks for the feedback guys

[Yemme]

I enjoyed both of them. I like the first one since I love anything linear... reminds me of piano keys.