+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 6 of 6
  1. #1
    TPF Noob!
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Seoul S.Korea
    Posts
    4
    My Gallery
    (0)
    My Photos Are OK to Edit
    Liked
    3 times

    Picnic Red Fort New Dehli

    Took this pic at Red Fort in New Dehli, I made the color more vibrant in Photoshop. Im a beginner Looking for some feedback




  2. # ADS

  3. #2
    Been spending a lot of time on here!
    Join Date
    Sep 2011
    Posts
    108
    My Gallery
    (0)
    My Photos Are OK to Edit
    Liked
    2 times
    The framing is awkward with the tree right in the middle of the frame. The background is also very distracting. Colors and focus look good, just watch your composition. Read about the rule of thirds, it'll be very helpful.

  4. #3
    TPF Junkie!
    Join Date
    Nov 2011
    Posts
    1,206
    My Gallery
    (4)
    My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit
    Liked
    207 times
    I think the composition is rather interesting, the building moves my eye from left to right, and ends up on the people. I might crop it in a little, to get rid of the extra space on the left. Now I agree that it is over sat'd, and I think its taking away from the already vivid outfits the people have, so I would tone that down quite a bit.

  5. #4
    I spend too much of my life on TPF!
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Brit in Bucharest
    Posts
    624
    My Gallery
    (1)
    My Photos Are OK to Edit
    Liked
    34 times
    Try cropping left and top and see how it looks.

  6. #5
    Been spending a lot of time on here!
    Join Date
    Dec 2010
    Location
    Galveston, Tx
    Posts
    183
    My Gallery
    (0)
    My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit
    Liked
    2 times
    a zoom lens would've been nice to have

  7. #6
    TPF Junkie!
    Join Date
    Oct 2005
    Location
    CT
    Posts
    1,238
    My Gallery
    (0)
    Liked
    10 times
    That sky isnt helping.


 

Sponsors

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts

Similar Threads

  1. Picnic Candids
    By AllHailZ in forum People Photography
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 09-27-2009, 08:42 AM
  2. Picnic C&C
    By AlexGray in forum The Black & White Gallery
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 08-05-2009, 04:40 PM
  3. Picnic anyone
    By johnhwyman in forum Landscape & Cityscape
    Replies: 8
    Last Post: 12-31-2008, 09:21 PM
  4. Picnic!
    By GlendaleViper in forum People Photography
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 07-02-2007, 08:02 PM
  5. What'd you bring to the picnic?
    By Joerocket in forum General Gallery
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: 01-17-2006, 12:36 PM

Search tags for this page

www.d com dehli lalkila moves

Click on a term to search for related topics.