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06-29-2012, 08:26 AM #1I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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Play day with the childern C&C please
Every Tuesday I go to a orphanage to show support for the children there. They really like us and know the exact time the bus arrives, it's kinda funny watching them wait as we pull up. I decided to take my camera after learning that it's safe to have around the kids. Sometimes they take better pictures than me. I use this time to get in some practice shots of the active children and challenge myself to be in the right place at the right time. It gets hard sometime with the fading light but I'm learning something new every time I go. Can you tell me how I can make the pictures better in anyway?

The power of angry birds by Jarrett_Hunt, on Flickr

Strut your stuff by Jarrett_Hunt, on Flickr

Ready to catch by Jarrett_Hunt, on Flickr

Heads up by Jarrett_Hunt, on Flickr

Chips by Jarrett_Hunt, on Flickr

Strong Arm by Jarrett_Hunt, on Flickr

Chillin on the sidelines by Jarrett_Hunt, on Flickr
This last picture is about the only one that I add PP to. I didn't know what look to give it without it looking like something from Instagram. Instagram seem to have ruined everything now making me paranoid about how to go about post processing the pictures.Proudly Serving in the United States Armed Forces, 2009-Present!!
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06-29-2012, 08:44 AM #2TPF Junkie!
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OMG, I chuckled at number three. That was a really great emotional capture. The processing in that last one is nice. Technically speaking, it might be the best of the set.
I suggest paying attention to three things, specifically:
1. Backgroungs
2. Framing (take care as to not chop limbs)
3. Exposure
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06-29-2012, 08:47 AM #3I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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To being a great human being
Shot 3 is my favorite... Love the moment captured there.. a little blurring, faster shutter should help this. I think these are great images. I cannot offer too much help as I am still learning myself. Maybe create a larger depth of field with the less desirable backgrounds, or just step to another angle to improve the background. Nice shots.
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06-29-2012, 08:48 AM #4I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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Another good thing with children is to get on their level instead of shooting downward...
I am striving to get better everyday and am incredibly grateful to those who assist me in my journey.
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06-29-2012, 09:19 AM #5TPF Junkie!
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Emotions...expressions... i really like them
I really appreciate your attitude...
Silence is Gold- So keep that in reserve; Speech is Silver-so use that for day to day requirements
Past is a broken Pot: Throw it away urgently
Present is a Pot: Handle it gently
Future is a lump of Clay: Mould it Intelligently
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06-29-2012, 10:34 AM #6TPF Junkie!
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Hey, this is wonderful! I love #3: what a great expression.

Here's what I'd do with #1:
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and with #2:
7466669164_6ac5f9dd73_k.jpgLast edited by Jaemie; 06-29-2012 at 11:43 AM.
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06-29-2012, 10:39 AM #7TPF Junkie!
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BTW, I have a friend who's teaching English in Korea to 1st graders. This week she's teaching them to say, "Yo, sup?!"
She sent me a video of a couple little girls saying "Yo, sup!" and giggling hysterically. They're SO cute!
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06-29-2012, 11:34 AM #8TPF Junkie!
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Framing, color
fill the frame with important stuff and cut out the unimportant stuff.
your PPing on the last gave him a bad color.
post the original please



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06-29-2012, 05:36 PM #9I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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Thank you every one for the comments. I will try to do a better job at framing shots, I also don't like chopping off limbs but it gets hard when they won't stay still. I just recieved a 35mm 1.8G so that should help blur out the background a bit. The play ground is a little small and crowded to be able to get shots with no one in the back. I will keep trying though and challege myself to be in the right spot. Also the 35mm should help me increase shutter speed in the low light canceling out the blur.
Here is the Original of the last picture that you asked for sir.
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06-29-2012, 05:36 PM #10I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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Proudly Serving in the United States Armed Forces, 2009-Present!!
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06-29-2012, 11:23 PM #11TPF Junkie!
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07-01-2012, 05:35 AM #12I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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Well thats a little too far to travel for me.
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07-01-2012, 10:41 AM #13TPF Junkie!
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07-01-2012, 10:55 AM #14I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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Tbey are Ok, but just snapshots for personal use.
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07-01-2012, 02:44 PM #15I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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