Feedback Needed Please and Thank you!

[followgrace]

Hello all,
I am a photography student, and am in my last few quarters of school. I really need some feedback to better myself. I appreciate any comments, tips, suggestions, anything really. This is my passion and I value all your opinions. Thank you all! ​

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[Bitter Jeweler]

FANTASTIC WATERMARK!

[PinkDoor]

What watermark??

[Sbuxo]

I doubt the huge disgusting watermark is necessary, I don't think anyone will be stealing these photos in a hurry.

I'm not sure if I can even critique these images, the boat one is decent I suppose but maybe a little more contrast. And please, for the future, leave the watermarks out.

[Sbuxo]

What watermark??

i would give you a like but i guess i've liked to many awesome sarcastic comments today. :c

[Ernicus]

It's not in the water, it's in the sky. Sheesh.

Noobs.

[followgrace]

I appreciate the comments... I agree, no watermark in the future.

[Bitter Jeweler]

I doubt the huge disgusting watermark is necessary, I don't think anyone will be stealing these photos in a hurry.

I'm not sure if I can even critique these images, the boat one is decent I suppose but maybe a little more contrast. And please, for the future, leave the watermarks out.

Better?

[followgrace]

YES!!! Thank you! This is my first post and I am so lost on here...

[Sbuxo]

@Bitter:

Actually yes, but I don't know if it's just me but I would crop out the wires coming off the end of boat, it's not that appealing. Also Grace, I'm not going to follow you () but I will tell you that the yellow light in photo attracts my attention the most and brings more attention to the wires that way. The rest of the picture isn't lit the same way but the mistiness does give it some type of dreary feel, but it doesn't make me "like" the photo either.

[kwilmes92]

i think your picture are the ****. AND I LOVE THE WATER MARK!! your AWESOME!! <3

[Ernicus]

So...think that's his girlfriend, hired friend, or himself with an alternate login?

lolz

[Bitter Jeweler]

i think your picture are the ****. AND I LOVE THE WATER MARK!! your AWESOME!! <3

You're.

[Ernicus]

i think your picture are the ****. AND I LOVE THE WATER MARK!! your AWESOME!! <3

You forgot the "s" in "pictures"...just sayin'.

Also, you never start a sentence with the word "and".

Oh, and you also forgot to use the proper version of "You, Your, You're". It should be "You're", which is short for "You Are"; as in "You're a troll...go away".

[Ernicus]

Damn you Bitter, always there before me. Grrrrr.