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    Buildings

    1. green elevator construction. overlighted it a bit because it's not really in focus at some points.


    2. some building, with reflection of another building



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    Yeah, I like the first one and here's an edit of the second one, [IMG] [/IMG]
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    I do like the second, and I would have suggested a crop, too, though not as close one as Trenton is offering up here.

    But I would definitely want to get rid of the four white dots at the bottom and of part of the (already somewhat cropped) roof of the building. So that in the end no roof is to be seen at all. After that I'd crop in from the left to get back to the original ratio. If that alone looks odd, I'd go further in from below until I'd feel "Now it looks good" .

 

 

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