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    My first posting.... NYC Skyline @ night

    What do you think??




    yes, that is lightning and no I did not edit this photo. I took it as such.

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    it seems soft especially on the buildings. I think f/8 may have been too shallow DOF. However even the rocks are soft as well. It could be due to the lens you are using though. 18-200mm lens is not going to be very sharp due to the massive 10x+ zoom. Also I think if you had moved to the right some and got less rock in the foreground it would be a little better. Some color in the sky just a hint would help as well.
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    I see an excellent color scheme in this image; yes i too find an overall softness in the image; but that did only a minimal ruin on the image


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    Can you fix the softness in post. There's some sharpening tools that can save this. Otherwise it's a great capture!!

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    I can try to work on the softness. Never thought of it nor do I really know how to fix the softness.
    But, I did print out this pic in 24"x36" and it looks fantastic hanging on my wall!!!!

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    If you have photoshop you could run unsharp mask on it. It is under filters. Hard to say the settings but I would say 70-100%, 2.8 pixels or a little more and 1 on the masking.
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    What about lightroom.... That's I've been using.
    I do need to get into Photoshop.

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    you could try light room I am not the biggest fan of LR sharpening. It is similar settings in LR
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    As others have already alluded to, there is an overall softness issue. Love the foreground colors, and the lightning bolt is a plus, too bad it wasn't a really major bolt. I would have cropped it so that the road in the bottom left wasn't in the photo for a stronger foreground.
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    it's beautiful


 

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