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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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06-05-2006 09:35 AM
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Just Corinna in real life
Site Moderator
May I be nitpicky?
For in the first photo I would have liked to see at least one of the two flowers entirely in the frame, in the second I would have wished for the butterfly's wings to be all inside the picture, and in the third it would have been nice to at least see a little light reflection on that bird's eye that points towards us. That bird is not quite a silhouette, yet what little detail shows is too dark. And the bird is smack in the centre of the picture.
But hey, these are nice.
I am only being nitpicky, like I said.
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a rush hour soul
TPF Editor
Site Moderator
I agree with the above assessment.
Close crops are wonderful, but sometimes it can leave the eye wanting just a bit more information on the main subject. These all have great potential, though.
I would love #3 if there were more light on the bird showing detail.
Beaten Path Photography
Site updated at last!
3) Recognize that if you're not part of the solution, you're likely part of the problem - whatever you perceive it to be.
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The first two I'd like to see in color... flowers usually are so pretty in color. The last one I think you could crop off a bit on the right side and it would look great
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
I agree with you guys about how I could have gotten the whole butterfly in the second shot. For the third, when I got it developed I cropped some of that space out on the right side and it does look better. I disagree with what you guys think on the first picture though, but thanks for the input!
and heres the first one in color