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08-31-2011 02:11 PM
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
I absolutely love the 2nd, do you mind sharing your settings?
Mel
If it were only as easy as point and shoot!
Nikon D3000 w/ 18-55mm kit lens
50mm f/1.8 G AF-S
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I agree. These are all really good, but the second one is fantastic! Great work.
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I particularly like #1 and #8. The first one is just great... good DOF, great focus, great colors, good lighting, well executed IMO.
Nikon D7000, Nikon MB-D11, Tokina 11-16 f/2.8, Tokina 16-50 f/2.8, Tokina 50-135 f/2.8, Tokina 100 f/2.8 Macro, Hoya 77mm CPOL
Slik 580DX Tripod, Domke F-2, Domke F-5XB, Nikon SB-600, (2) Nikon SB-28, Nikon SB-28DX, Yongnuo RF-602 Triggers
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
These are just great. I have really enjoyed them. Great job, can't wait to see more from you. You're 15? You have a great eye! Keep up the great work!
Mel
If it were only as easy as point and shoot!
Nikon D3000 w/ 18-55mm kit lens
50mm f/1.8 G AF-S
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These are gorgeous! I love #1 and #2. #2 looks so dreamy, like a watercolor painting.
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
Just my opinions...
First set #1: Good DOF choice, very good focus centering (on eyes). Color scheme works well - neutral fly on brilliant green and that eye is perfect.
First set #2: Very good eye for composition, great background bokeh, terrific color scheme. However, brightness is too high (This is corrected with Second Set #1 along with a color shift).
First set #3 & #5: Lighting hurt this one. Maybe one of those little 12" diffuser disc would help? Missed a bit on focus (or motion blur)
2nd set #1: Repeat from first set: I was going to question the color fedelity of previous version of this one - here it looks like the brightness and color got corrected, however, I like the color of the first one!
2nd set #2: Good composition, circles of confusion work well with the straight lines of the twig. Lighting may have hurt this one too. The red at the bottom of twig is point of interest but too small - would have maybe gotten closer to that. Some of the chroma around the water drops seem strange.
2nd set #3:Good background, maybe a little too bright(?). Face of bug in shadowy area compared to rest of image.
2nd set #4: Lighting killed this one, but bug wasn't in good position anyway so not much loss.
2nd set #5: Background is perfect - get rid of the bug and you have a nice shot here!
At 15 you are doing better than me! Keep it up. The only pointer I might give is to take care with exposure time. Outdoor work in direct sunlight can be maddening and going after things that move make it even harder, but keep an eye on the meter, bracket if you have time and also look into carring a small diffuser disc to help with direct sunlight contrasting.
Spider! I forgot about the spider. I think this is what we used to call "garden spiders", harmless critters and pretty. Their backs have the neat pattern but to my eye the back-end of a bug doesn't work. Best to find a different angle and focus point for this one?
Last edited by jrice12; 08-31-2011 at 03:37 PM.
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Thank you all-especially jrice,your advices are really helpfull.I have to built a diffuser for my flash (I've got metz 48 and yn 460)but i haven't got idea how it should looks.
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number one is my favorite. it is soo close. amazing.
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Awesome Photo's Where do you find the bugs?
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Thanks 
In the meadow near the house.
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Cool! What Lens Do You Use If You Don't Mind Me Asking?
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I use tamron 90/2.8
You can see in exif all data