+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 4 of 4
  1. #1
    No longer a newbie, moving up!
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    85
    My Gallery
    (0)
    My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit
    Liked
    0 times

    Thumbs up Horses, horses...





    All crits are welcome
    Starry, starry night...

  2. # ADS

  3. #2
    TPF Junkie!
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Posts
    10,416
    My Gallery
    (0)
    My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit
    Liked
    8 times
    I'll dive in here. No one should sink to the bottom without a comment except me.

    It looks like you live in a lovely area with great potential, and of these three shot, I like the third the most. They seem to suffer a bit from composition problems. For the most part, containg distracting elements (fence posts). I suggest initially shooting the photos with the subject off to the side a bit one way or another. Try to draw the viewer into the photo. Tell a story.

    I do like the first shot too. But the centeredness and the fence post coming out of his elbow sort of detract from the feeling I get from it.

    The third would be better if it didn't include the fence post in the front and maybe shot from a little lower angle to break up some of the lines.

    Click this link for a search on basic photo composition tips and tricks.

    http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&q...to+composition

    Check it out. Looking forward to seeing some more shots of your part of God's Country.
    Wanna have some fun? - Critique a critique.

  4. #3
    I spend too much of my life on TPF!
    Join Date
    Nov 2007
    Location
    London ON
    Posts
    315
    My Gallery
    (0)
    My Photos Are OK to Edit
    Liked
    0 times
    I'm going to second abraxas on there being a lot of potential for you to shoot in your area. And with all those horses, yay, looking forward to seeing more. Gotta give all the bird & otter shots a run for their money

    Neat shot of the bit design in #2, I've never seen one like it.

  5. #4
    No longer a newbie, moving up!
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    85
    My Gallery
    (0)
    My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit
    Liked
    0 times
    Thanks so much for the crits, both of you. You are both right on with your comments. I love horses so I guess it's hard for me to see the forest for the tress... the bit i put up just to show the unusualness of it.

    Will continue to work on form, setting and artistice composition...

    Carly
    Starry, starry night...


 

Sponsors

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts

Similar Threads

  1. Horses in B&W (C&C please)
    By giulio1993 in forum Photography Beginners' Forum
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 02-02-2011, 07:56 AM
  2. Horses
    By ilyfel in forum General Gallery
    Replies: 15
    Last Post: 11-11-2007, 10:24 PM
  3. Horses
    By Danad in forum Landscape & Cityscape
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 11-06-2006, 11:58 AM
  4. Horses - Old photos of my horses
    By Cheyenne in forum Landscape & Cityscape
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 08-01-2006, 11:29 PM
  5. horses... which one?
    By mentos_007 in forum General Gallery
    Replies: 13
    Last Post: 09-27-2005, 07:45 AM