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05-26-2008 05:54 PM
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
My favs are actually 6 and 9.
The strings thing is funny! It really does kinda give you that feeling....and I even get a greater sense of DOF though he's right at the dock/platform he's jumping off of...
they're all really, really nice if you ask me.
# 4 is a great shot too? love to see that in color maybe.
thanks for posting them. I love seeing everyone's photos and the ones of their kids are always some of the best!!!
Nikon D60
15-55mm VR
55-200mm VR
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
I like these, especially 3 & 4.
No face, but they're unique.
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
#1 is so much fun! Love the bright colors in #7 & #8. They're all really nice, Kelly.
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Thank you! Here's 4 in color. I'm open to harsh critiquing!
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#1: Good shot. A little too much contrast.
#2: Great. Check the highlights on the shorts.
#3: Nice, but very weird effect/bokeh.
#4: I'm undecided. There's really a lot of blur, and I'd much prefer it from the front.
#5: Not a keeper in my book.
#6: Probably the best. Check the highlight on his chest, drop the contrast, bring out more detail in the hair.
#7: A pretty good all-around shot.
#8: I know you love it but it's not a keeper for me. He looks too concerned, and the highlights are too pronounced.
#9: Good shot but poor shadow detail and you need to check the highlights on the shorts again. Could use a re-work in post.
The moment you cheat for the sake of beauty, you know you're an artist.
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Originally Posted by
Alpha
#1: Good shot. A little too much contrast.
#2: Great. Check the highlights on the shorts.
#3: Nice, but very weird effect/bokeh.
#4: I'm undecided. There's really a lot of blur, and I'd much prefer it from the front.
#5: Not a keeper in my book.
#6: Probably the best. Check the highlight on his chest, drop the contrast, bring out more detail in the hair.
#7: A pretty good all-around shot.
#8: I know you love it but it's not a keeper for me. He looks too concerned, and the highlights are too pronounced.
#9: Good shot but poor shadow detail and you need to check the highlights on the shorts again. Could use a re-work in post.
Thank you 
The weird bokah was a surface blur.. I used it on 3 and 4. They are actually quite sharp SOOC. 
Those white shorts!!!! I did seem to blow them out a lot. And then moreso in PP. Since these shots were just for fun, I don't really care to fix them, but I was definilty aware of it while shooting and will be really careful on a client shoot for something like that. It does ruin the shot in the end.