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    Too much shadow contrast on the faces: could use some fill flash.
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    Have to agree with willard; I think two off-camera flashes with diffusers would have evened things up nicely. Aside from that, nice image - how can you go wrong shooting four blondes in t-shirts?

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    Quote Originally Posted by tirediron View Post
    Have to agree with willard; I think two off-camera flashes with diffusers would have evened things up nicely. Aside from that, nice image - how can you go wrong shooting four blondes in t-shirts?
    Hey now, us brunettes can be pretty hot too! lol!

    Definately could have used a reflector or some fill. The colors in the background are very pretty though!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lacey Anne View Post
    Hey now, us brunettes can be pretty hot too! lol!
    You'll get no argument from me on that one either!

    Quote Originally Posted by Lacey Anne View Post
    Definately could have used a reflector or some fill. The colors in the background are very pretty though!
    I was wondering about that; it looks to me like the sun is too low in the sky for a reflector to work in this setting...

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    Quote Originally Posted by tirediron View Post
    You'll get no argument from me on that one either!


    I was wondering about that; it looks to me like the sun is too low in the sky for a reflector to work in this setting...
    Well, you'd better not argue! lol!

    I would think there would still be enough light reflecting off the water to use a reflector but of course, I wasn't there... You could be very well be right. I've been wrong before. Except about hot brunettes. There I'm never wrong.

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