Model Lisa - Porche GT1

stsinner · 12-24-2008, 08:02 PM

I think the picture is way too bright-almost glowing. I can't even appreciate the car, and I'm a car nut.. Her face seems out of focus, and her legs seem to be glowing....

Just my 0.02.

Prophet · 12-24-2008, 08:44 PM

I have to agree with St. Sinner. Also looks a bit flat to me. It doesn't pop. Just curious what equipment were you using? Colors look good though.

Just me being me... I would have moved her a little to the front and positioned the camera at a direct angle from the drivers front fender. That way you get a little more depth. Just me, but I don't know wtf I'm talkin about.

-JD-

stsinner · 12-24-2008, 09:06 PM

This same model has been used several times for your shot, and while your work is genereally great, and her body is jammin'... She really isn't all that pretty.. I'd see if you can get a different model.. I'm just being honest.. Paris Hilton glasses a pretty model do not make..

amkphotography · 12-24-2008, 09:15 PM

I like the shot for the most part but I think if the background had been blurred, it'd be more appealing to the eye. But that's just my thought.

12-24-2008, 08:44 PM	#17
Prophet Been spending a lot of time on here! Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: NE Indiana Posts: 187 My Photos Are OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	I have to agree with St. Sinner. Also looks a bit flat to me. It doesn't pop. Just curious what equipment were you using? Colors look good though. Just me being me... I would have moved her a little to the front and positioned the camera at a direct angle from the drivers front fender. That way you get a little more depth. Just me, but I don't know wtf I'm talkin about. -JD- __________________ Canon 30D Canon EF 17-40mm USM f4 L Canon EF 50mm f1.8 II Sigma 28-80mm f3.5 II (Macro) Canon EF 85mm USM f1.8 Canon EF 70-200mm USM f4 L Speedlight 430EX Mark I Photo Blog: http://jp-photog.blogspot.com/

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12-24-2008, 08:02 PM	#16
stsinner Banned Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,718 My Photos Are OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	I think the picture is way too bright-almost glowing. I can't even appreciate the car, and I'm a car nut.. Her face seems out of focus, and her legs seem to be glowing.... Just my 0.02.

12-24-2008, 09:06 PM	#18
stsinner Banned Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,718 My Photos Are OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	This same model has been used several times for your shot, and while your work is genereally great, and her body is jammin'... She really isn't all that pretty.. I'd see if you can get a different model.. I'm just being honest.. Paris Hilton glasses a pretty model do not make..

12-24-2008, 09:15 PM	#19
amkphotography Been spending a lot of time on here! Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Colorado Posts: 137 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	I like the shot for the most part but I think if the background had been blurred, it'd be more appealing to the eye. But that's just my thought.

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