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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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07-20-2009 01:45 PM
# ADS
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
white on black/black on white
yr exposures are correct in outdoor shots.... in such type of fashion/different/personal shoots the BG is rightly chosen.....except the first outdoor shot, in the indoor shots the man's skin is giving more orangish tone, while girl more dark...i think u cud maintain slight more exposure for indoor shots...otherwise postures are good.....what was the light source inside?.....i think available light. 5th is great.
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
Thanks for your response. These were all outdoor shots, however some were on a small porch of a abandoned house. For this whole shoot I was fighting bright sunlight, so I had to find small areas of shade to shoot in. Even on the porch shots (about 5 feet in width, out from the house) half was sunlit, I had to have someone hold a 42 inch gobo to block the sun enough for the shot. My main lights were a 60 inch umbrella and a 22 inch beauty dish, no shots were made with just available ambient light.
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
white on black/black on white
thanks for ur feedback.....there is contrast in body colour which is taken care of.
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The guy had an orange tint... might wanna check that out.
To be realistic the only thing I would change is the background. I think I solid, yet neutral color would have done a beter job. Maybe a B&W would have done well too.
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!

Originally Posted by
Dylan-Fishman
The guy had an orange tint... might wanna check that out.
To be realistic the only thing I would change is the background. I think I solid, yet neutral color would have done a beter job. Maybe a B&W would have done well too.
Now looking at them on my usual computer I agree about the orange, I have adjusted them slightly (red channel). The male model did have kind of a orange tint though, (prob tan in a can).
As far as the background, this is what the models wanted. They wanted a grunge type feel, hence, the graffiti covered walls and abandoned house. The shoot was done in downtown Atlanta (Little Five Points area).
Thanks for the input.
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
I actually like these photos very much. Hope this guy doesn't run across your comment about tan in a can.....it's better than melanoma....
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I like the expressions in 5 but it needed a shallower depth of field in my opinion. They are all pretty good though. Well done.
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!

Originally Posted by
SarahTomlin
I actually like these photos very much. Hope this guy doesn't run across your comment about tan in a can.....it's better than melanoma....
Thanks. You are right about my comment, sometimes I type without thinking,
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Originally Posted by
Enough Already
I like the expressions in 5 but it needed a shallower depth of field in my opinion. They are all pretty good though. Well done.
Can't argue with that, but I was working in blotchy sun light so any area with sun would have been blown out if I opened my aperture. Thanks, for commenting.

Originally Posted by
Dcrymes84
I like
Thanks.
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I like these photos. Who knows what they are about but that is part of their appeal in a way.
As far as the background is concerned, I would have picked an abandoned industrial type setting myself, but it is not my shoot and we don't even know what those two really had in mind. I have to say, though, that I much prefer the ones in which no nature shows. To me, #5 doesn't fit very well in the series.
As for you, the photographer, at least, it was not a boring shoot
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Originally Posted by
c.cloudwalker
I like these photos. Who knows what they are about but that is part of their appeal in a way.
As far as the background is concerned, I would have picked an abandoned industrial type setting myself, but it is not my shoot and we don't even know what those two really had in mind. I have to say, though, that I much prefer the ones in which no nature shows. To me, #5 doesn't fit very well in the series.
As for you, the photographer, at least, it was not a boring shoot

These are two local models that are trying to build their portfolios. They chose the theme and the location of the shoot. I can tell you that I was not thrilled with the location and it's busy backgrounds. Another hindrance was that I had very little shade and very little room to work and the models were always very close to the back ground (they had no choice). Below are 2 photos of the location, which were shot the day before. One of the wall that runs parallel to a street, and one of an abandoned house overgrown with vegetation. In shot #5 from above they are hanging off the porch of the house.
It was indeed an interesting shoot, challenging and fun at the same time. I will be working with these models again in about a week. This time I will have more control of the location and theme.
Thanks for your comments.

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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
I like the idea. I would actually prefer a simpler background with their outfits and makeup. I think the graffiti distracts from the subjects.
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It was indeed an interesting shoot, challenging and fun at the same time. I will be working with these models again in about a week. This time I will have more control of the location and theme.
Can't wait to see the results of this next shoot.
Btw, interesting thing about busy images: one doesn't always see everything on the first look-see. It pays to go and look again. I just noticed the bird in her hair