Removing my images... too many ill folks up in this house... peace...
Removing my images... too many ill folks up in this house... peace...
Last edited by shadowlands; 12-10-2010 at 12:32 PM.
"shadowlands"
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I think you should change the style of clothing. I seen your past photos and she is always in booty shorts. I don’t know, it makes her look cheap in these pictures. I can also see her tan like which just looks weird for me. Maybe you can touch that up in PS.
Last edited by imstuner; 12-10-2010 at 08:34 AM.
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Im not sure if youre just *sharing* these... or looking for C/C, so i wasnt sure what to include. So here it is.
IMHO, I think that whatever shes going with the positioning of her head/neck is not making her chin/neck area very flattering. Also, dont know if its just me or not... but her knees look dry and coarse, so the lighter skin sticks out from the rest of her leg. Like an elbow. Maybe some lotion?
Ive never worked with background settings so I'm not sure how much of a pain they are... or if getting wrinkles is inevitable, but there are a large amount of very noticeable wrinkles surrounding her feet. Im not sure if it would benefit the shot to clone those out for a seamless look?
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Last edited by shadowlands; 12-10-2010 at 12:33 PM.
"shadowlands"
Nikon D90
Nikon D5000
Nikon AF 50mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 35mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 70-300mm VR
Nikon AF-S 18-200mm VR
Nikon SB-600 & MB-D80 Battery Grip
Bogen-Manfrotto 3001/222/3016/234rc/233b
Lowepro Slingshot 202
www.flickr.com/photos/dbdigital/
"shadowlands"
Nikon D90
Nikon D5000
Nikon AF 50mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 35mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 70-300mm VR
Nikon AF-S 18-200mm VR
Nikon SB-600 & MB-D80 Battery Grip
Bogen-Manfrotto 3001/222/3016/234rc/233b
Lowepro Slingshot 202
www.flickr.com/photos/dbdigital/
"shadowlands"
Nikon D90
Nikon D5000
Nikon AF 50mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 35mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 70-300mm VR
Nikon AF-S 18-200mm VR
Nikon SB-600 & MB-D80 Battery Grip
Bogen-Manfrotto 3001/222/3016/234rc/233b
Lowepro Slingshot 202
www.flickr.com/photos/dbdigital/
Learn as if you were going to live forever; Live as if you were going to die tomorrow.
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"shadowlands"
Nikon D90
Nikon D5000
Nikon AF 50mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 35mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 70-300mm VR
Nikon AF-S 18-200mm VR
Nikon SB-600 & MB-D80 Battery Grip
Bogen-Manfrotto 3001/222/3016/234rc/233b
Lowepro Slingshot 202
www.flickr.com/photos/dbdigital/
She must have forgot her wedding ring.
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I think you should post something w/ different outfits to be honest. I know u like her in shorts and undies but it gives the wrong impression to others IMO. It's your choice. Also I'd post more in the beginner section, you'll get more help there from people as more people tend to go there.
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Is your background laying on a carpeted floor? I've never used a fabric background, so I could be wide of the mark. If it is, I wonder if there would be any difference having it laying on a hard floor with the feet causing wrinkles. Just a thought.
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You could use a panel of plywood for the flooring and that ould fix that issue.
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"shadowlands"
Nikon D90
Nikon D5000
Nikon AF 50mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 35mm F1.8
Nikon AF-S 70-300mm VR
Nikon AF-S 18-200mm VR
Nikon SB-600 & MB-D80 Battery Grip
Bogen-Manfrotto 3001/222/3016/234rc/233b
Lowepro Slingshot 202
www.flickr.com/photos/dbdigital/