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    My first C&C - "The cowgirl"

    Trying to get better at my posing and Photoshop skills, please let me know what should be different for this one?

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    Not bad, could of used some fill light from a reflector. I think it might have looked better with all trees behind her and not the blown out sky in the corner.

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    yeah, a fill light from the bottom left I think nails the model. And then as shooter said, work on your background a bit more.

    also, her posture is kind of making her breasts look crooked, not super flattering.

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    I have some of her with trees behind her... Ill dig one of those out.

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    As was said, some diffused fill light and a better background would have helped a great deal. There a big hair shadow on her left cheek and a harsh hot spot on her right shoulder.
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