Portrait for me - a few seconds underwater !!

[Ateyah_Jay]

Hello Everyone !!

I Present to you the first work in editing. after I got green screen .. I used Photoshop CS3. There is a simple error I used more topaz so my face look like old man also the sad thing is I lost the PSD file





Info. Image

Camera Model : Canon EOS 600D
Lens : Canon EF 50mm
F-Number : F/4
Shutter Speed : 1/790 sec.




I want the criticism & opinions


Ateyah Jay - Marshall

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[o hey tyler]

It's a cool concept. It just looks too much like a composite when I look at it.

If you had your shirt wet even up to your shoulders, and possibly spritzed your face with water as well, it would have added a lot to the photograph.

Interested to see more work from you, keep shooting.

[Ateyah_Jay]

It is the beginning of a world that has no end
Thank you very much tyler = )

ateyah

[MReid]

Kinda looks like you are standing on the other side of a fish tank .
Like the shot...creative and well executed.

[Ateyah_Jay]

I like ur imagination , MReid ^^
thx for ur comment = )

[Trever1t]

I have no clue how to do it so yeah, very creative. I like Tyler's ideas, get that shirt wet, water drops coming off your hair/face and it's a winner! REeminds me of some album cover.

[ctDigitalPhotograghy]

Not a bad first try at all!

[pashabelman]

amazing stuff.

[annadavis]

A nice stuff.. Did you design it to have an appearance of a cartoon? ..
You forget the eyelashes you need some color correction there.. It appears to be dry and didn't match the eyebrows..

[Ateyah_Jay]

thx all
next time. I will try to fix error