Another model shot

**53cent** · 07-04-2012, 02:15 PM

From the same model from a couple of days ago.

Black swan by Ismar Basic, on Flickr

What do you think?

**Ads** · 07-04-2012 02:15 PM

**The_Traveler** · 07-04-2012, 02:53 PM

terrific PPing - and nice legs too

**Jaemie** · 07-04-2012, 03:33 PM

That's beautiful - colour, comp, tones, DOF, focus, movement. I love it. The cut head might be my only criticism.

**JoshuaSimPhotography** · 07-05-2012, 06:03 AM

I really love the background glow

**cayto** · 07-05-2012, 06:36 AM

Everything seems fine to me, except the cut head.

Really really nice DOF

**53cent** · 07-05-2012, 07:15 AM

I wish I could paste the head back on to see how it looks haha, but unfortunately it wasn't it the shot initially. But thanks everyone!

**spacefuzz** · 07-05-2012, 09:37 AM

I figured you cut the head as part of the art. doesnt bother me.

I agree nice legs!

**Forkie** · 07-05-2012, 10:55 AM

I thought it was quite clear that you intended to cut off the head. Great shot. The colours are very nice.

**53cent** · 07-05-2012, 11:59 AM

Originally Posted by Forkie

I thought it was quite clear that you intended to cut off the head. Great shot. The colours are very nice.

I actually did, but I didnt't do that in photoshop, this is how I shot it, because this was the composition I was looking for.

**fjrabon** · 07-05-2012, 12:07 PM

Love it. And yeah, the cut head is I think a plus, because it makes the structure of the skirt and legs the subject, whereas if the head was in there, we're so biologically programmed to focus on heads, that the head would immediately become the subject.

I also love the way you used the leading line of the fence to further point to the skirt being the subject.

My only nit to pick is the yellowish building in the background is a tiny bit distracting, since it stands out from the very dark trees.

I'd almost like to see it with a bit rougher grain added in. Don't know that it would work, but it might. If you have one of the really nice artificial grain plug ins, might be worth a try.

**chuasam** · 07-05-2012, 01:28 PM

Nice legs, outfit and processing.
Was her face that bad that you had to crop it out

**Geaux** · 07-05-2012, 07:39 PM

Not sure if this was intended, but the leading lines of the bannister leading to her midsection is a nice touch. This would be an excellent fashion shot with the intent to show off the skirt.

**kundalini** · 07-07-2012, 06:41 AM

Perfect timing on the stride.

**manaheim** · 07-07-2012, 07:05 AM

Very neat. Love everything about this.

**cgipson1** · 07-07-2012, 07:34 AM

nicely done! Lovely legs...

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