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10-19-2007, 03:15 PM #1No longer a newbie, moving up!
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First attempt at a portrait with studio Flash
Hi,
I have got myself a set of Elinchrom D-lites to try and get into portrait photography. C&C greatly appreciated ( good or Bad )
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Dave
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10-19-2007, 03:20 PM #2
great portraits.
but i dot like the background try a flat sheet hung on the wall
or a plain wall
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10-19-2007, 03:31 PM #3No longer a newbie, moving up!
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Ops, Forgot to put that I am waiting for my background, so I improvised and used the curtains.
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10-20-2007, 01:57 PM #4I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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That second pose is very cute. I don't really like the colors of the pics though...there is kind of an orangeish cast over the whole thing.
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10-22-2007, 05:30 AM #6No longer a newbie, moving up!
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Are you using a snoop light? The lighting could have been a little better from over the top of your model (to cast light on the top of the hair centrally), a little more light from the lower left would have been good to. I agree that the background could do with improving

Otherwise, yes, they are good shots.
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