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[bfphoto]

I love the concept, but feel like it maybe should have been shot at a higher aperture... I would like to see a little more clarity in the face of the girl... Other than that love the light!

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[cguron]

The picture does not convey the theme. It is possible to improve the picture in technical sense so that you are able to provide a desired effect, but it does not establish the connection with the theme.

[mozzie71]

Id probably crop out a lot of the blackness on the left... maybe bump the colours up a tad Nice shot though!