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  1. 07-10-2009 10:16 AM #1
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    A few of my latest shots

    Heres a couple of new shots, I was trying to improve my composition. What do you guys think?

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    I would like to know what could be improved on these my self,they look perfect to me!
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  4. 07-11-2009 02:38 AM #3
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    Thanks hopdaddy, I'm quite pleased with them but i wouldn't go that far

    Any thoughts on composition?
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  5. 07-11-2009 05:57 AM #4
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    Your compositions seems good. I like the shots. My only complaint is #1 and #2 seem a bit overexposed. # 3 is my favourite but i think if you PP it to bring out more of the orange sky it would look awesome. Good stuff
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  6. 07-11-2009 06:01 AM #5
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    yeah I was thinking the first 2 are a tad overexposed!

    #3 I like Great Shot!

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    You said that your goal with these was composition.... SUCCESS! Now to go back and nail the rest of the shot. Nice locations!
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  8. 07-11-2009 05:43 PM #7
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    Thanks guys, I'm still on a steep learning curve but I'm finally starting to get the hang of composition. Have to practice my exposures now
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  9. 07-12-2009 12:26 AM #8
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    I love #3, but the orange sky does seem to bleed over into the doorway and onto the man's sillouette.
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    The color of the first two seem a little off - seems to me the green could be a little "greener".
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