A few of my latest shots

kreuzberg · 07-10-2009, 09:16 AM

Heres a couple of new shots, I was trying to improve my composition. What do you guys think?

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hopdaddy · 07-10-2009, 10:50 AM

I would like to know what could be improved on these my self,they look perfect to me!
wow.....just....wow!

kreuzberg · 07-11-2009, 01:38 AM

Thanks hopdaddy, I'm quite pleased with them but i wouldn't go that far

Any thoughts on composition?

TriniPhototakeoutta · 07-11-2009, 04:57 AM

Your compositions seems good. I like the shots. My only complaint is #1 and #2 seem a bit overexposed. # 3 is my favourite but i think if you PP it to bring out more of the orange sky it would look awesome. Good stuff

Jeffro · 07-11-2009, 05:01 AM

yeah I was thinking the first 2 are a tad overexposed!

#3 I like Great Shot!

yogibear · 07-11-2009, 06:59 AM

You said that your goal with these was composition.... SUCCESS! Now to go back and nail the rest of the shot. Nice locations!

kreuzberg · 07-11-2009, 04:43 PM

Thanks guys, I'm still on a steep learning curve but I'm finally starting to get the hang of composition. Have to practice my exposures now

SanctuS · 07-11-2009, 11:26 PM

I love #3, but the orange sky does seem to bleed over into the doorway and onto the man's sillouette.

Stock Photos · 07-13-2009, 02:16 AM

The color of the first two seem a little off - seems to me the green could be a little "greener".

07-11-2009, 04:57 AM	#4
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07-11-2009, 05:01 AM	#5
Jeffro I spend too much of my life on TPF! Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Louisiana Posts: 597 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts My Gallery: (10)	yeah I was thinking the first 2 are a tad overexposed! #3 I like Great Shot! __________________ www.facebook.com/J.EatleyPhotography My Equipment: NIKON D90---3.5-5.6 18mm-105mm Kit Lens---Nikon 50mm 1.8---Sigma 70-200mm 2.8---Silk Tripod---85mm/1.8 (LOANER)---Nikon SB-600---ADOBE Photoshop Master Collections---Lightroom 2---Lightroom 3 Beta---Nikon Battery Grip

07-11-2009, 06:59 AM	#6
yogibear Been spending a lot of time on here! Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 164 My Photos Are OK to Edit Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post My Gallery: (0)	You said that your goal with these was composition.... SUCCESS! Now to go back and nail the rest of the shot. Nice locations! __________________ Flikr: http://www.flickr.com/photos/boldkiwi/ Twitter: http://twitter.com/gphotos Blog: http://gphotos.wordpress.com/

07-11-2009, 04:43 PM	#7
kreuzberg No longer a newbie, moving up! Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 78 My Photos Are OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	Thanks guys, I'm still on a steep learning curve but I'm finally starting to get the hang of composition. Have to practice my exposures now __________________ Flickr

07-11-2009, 11:26 PM	#8
SanctuS Been spending a lot of time on here! Join Date: May 2007 Location: Toledo, Ohio Posts: 162 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	I love #3, but the orange sky does seem to bleed over into the doorway and onto the man's sillouette. __________________ Canon 30D Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II Canon EF 28-105mm f/3.5-4.5 II USM Canon EF 75-300mm Flickr

07-10-2009, 09:16 AM	#1
kreuzberg No longer a newbie, moving up! Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 78 My Photos Are OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	A few of my latest shots Heres a couple of new shots, I was trying to improve my composition. What do you guys think? 1. 2. 3. __________________ Flickr

07-10-2009, 10:50 AM	#2
hopdaddy Been spending a lot of time on here! Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Hotlanta,Ga Posts: 143 My Photos Are OK to Edit Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post My Gallery: (5)	I would like to know what could be improved on these my self,they look perfect to me! wow.....just....wow! __________________ http://www.flickr.com/photos/keakaphoto D90, 50MM f1.8,105MM f2.8,18-105MM kit,55-200 MM kit,70-300MM kit

07-11-2009, 01:38 AM	#3
kreuzberg No longer a newbie, moving up! Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 78 My Photos Are OK to Edit Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts My Gallery: (0)	Thanks hopdaddy, I'm quite pleased with them but i wouldn't go that far Any thoughts on composition? __________________ Flickr

07-13-2009, 02:16 AM	#9
Stock Photos Been spending a lot of time on here! Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 212 My Photos Are NOT OK to Edit Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts My Gallery: (0)	The color of the first two seem a little off - seems to me the green could be a little "greener". __________________ Stock Photos PowerPoint Templates

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