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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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03-15-2010 07:42 PM
# ADS
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
#1 is great ...i like how the background color compliments her
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Was #1 taken at the Botanical Gardens?
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They are all nice... #1 is my favorite, but in my opinion, a crop so there is a bit less empty space to her left would be great.

Just my opinion...
Last edited by BuS_RiDeR; 03-15-2010 at 11:28 PM.
Reason: Having trouble attaching "my" edit of photo #1
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Been spending a lot of time on here!
I like number 1 the most as well but I actually think I would have liked it with her in the same position but on the right of the frame. It seems like she's leaning more towards the left and I want to look to that side but only get to the end of the picture.
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!

Originally Posted by
Bitter Jeweler
Was #1 taken at the Botanical Gardens?
It was actually taken on a bike trail near my house on a little "nature walk" loop right off the trail. I was worried it wouldn't be picturesque enough, but the fall foliage that was left actually turned out nicely. I live in a tiny rural town, so we don't have lovely botanical gardens around here.
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Well, botanical gardens or not, that really is a lovelly image. (the railing looked "familiar",lol)
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!
Thank you! I was really pleased with the results as well. Validation FTW!
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To me, the first one is really nice. Perfect.
The others all have cropping issues:
#2 - cropped too closely on the side of her face.
#3 - cropped too closely on her hat
#4 - cropped too loosely on the left. All that blank space doesn't add anything.I think you were right to crop off the top of his yead
The moral of the story is to shoot a little looser, at full resolution. You can crop later, but you can never un-crop.
"Well begun is half done."
-Aristotle
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I spend too much of my life on TPF!

Originally Posted by
g-fi
3.

(I was so mad at myself for cutting off her elbow, we were working quickly in some sketchy natural light)
I'd be more mad that her bra strap is hanging out. I hate to sound so critical, but the bra strap really turned this shot from "fun and playful" to "trailer trash".
I love #4 though... and #1 is really great as well.