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    My wife...

    Practicing on the wife again... Very new to photography...CC welcome..



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    It's not so easy to give C&C when you personalize it with a title like 'My Wife' or 'My (fill in the blank).

    With that, the comment I am willing to make is that IMO, it is better to have some white on either side of the eye, even just a sliver.

    Oh yeah, she is quite pretty.
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    Thank you for your comment.. I toke this pic a little before I heard your advice about it a couple days ago about the eyes.. I will make sure to keep that in mind.. Thank you!!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by kundalini View Post
    it is better to have some white on either side of the eye, even just a sliver.
    I have seen for lot of models doing this. Can you please tell me the reason?

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    I am a beginner too, so nothing very technical,

    I like the lighting and hair movement

    the only thing I am sure in that picture is the posture, I would have preferred her shoulders a little more oppened, athough she is smiling, I feel she is closed...


    that is my humble 2 cent ( feel free to contradict me if you don't agree, critic about my critique is very welcomed

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    personally, i would have moved her more to the right of the frame and stopped down a bit more, but other than that, its a very nice image and you have a very lovely wife!

 

 

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