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    My Daughter...

    Hey... I just took these pics of my daughter this afternoon. I wanted to try out a new location before bringing anyone out. Nothing has been touched up or adjusted yet, so be gentle.

    (This is my first post w/pics - so let me now if I goofed anything up etiquete wise.)










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    Hey,

    Welcome to the forums. Here are my opinions:

    Picture #1: I think it is a bit overexposed. Also, there seems to be too much happening in the background. Maybe re-shoot somewhere with fewer objects in the background.

    Picture #2: That picture scared me. It looks like your daughter's head did a 180. Her head is just in an un-natural position for me.

    Picture #3: That one looks fine to me. I like the light hitting her side.

    Picture #4: Again, this one is fine except for one small object in the background (it’s gray, looks kind of like a well). It takes my eye away from the subject of the photo (your daughter) and makes me want to figure out what’s in the background.
    All Comments/Critiques are welcome on ALL pictures I post! DON'T HOLD BACK!

    Please don't Edit my photos unless it is posted in the thread. Thanks!

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    Hi Mike, and welcome to ThePhotoForum.
    You have not goofed up etiquettewise ... but since these are portraits of your daughter (who is beautiful!), I find these best hosted by the Portrait and Wedding Photography Forum, so I shall move them over there, ok? Many members who specialize on Portrait photography go there and you might get a wider feedback on these.

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    Nice set off pics, the first one is what you imagine bein 20x30" being a big framed picture on the wall. Keep up the good Work.
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    I really like the third picture the best - the rest seem to posed (not that that is a bad thing) but I'm really a fan of the candid/natural shots! You have a beautiful daughter by the way!
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