Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Tennessee Landscape, Jun 15, 2008.
here is a shot from my first wedding, a little play with DOF and som P.P.
Its not bad but there is room for improvements, the brides jacket looks blown out and has lost all detail her eyes could do with a little bit more work to make them brighter and sharper.
I think I like the composition with the bridesmaids behind, with the shallow DOF but maybe crop a little bit further from the bride so you have her whole hair in the shot
I may be very wrong in saying this but on my crappy laptop it looks like you missed focus on the brides eyes, and got her hair instead-I may be wrong like I said im on a crappy laptop.
Congratulations on your first wedding, was it scary?
yeah, I missed focus on one eye, and it was rushed cuz they were ready to get to the reception and it was the last picture. i sure did blow out the dress, but, and I say but lightly but I think in a way it's also kinda cool but I do wish I didn't screw that part up
thanks for the feedback, and by the way I was really nervous doing my first wedding. I didn't think I would be but I was. At least I got my first one under my belt and a lot of learning from it.
i ant imagine doing my first wedding-im a long way off, way to slow at getting all my settings to what I want lol.
I do like your idea for the picture though
Suggestion, better cropping and a little more contrast.
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