14 year old photography shots, what do you think?

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  1. harryfletcher09

    harryfletcher09 TPF Noob!

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    im 14, live in england and i love photography
    comment what you think, how i should improve etc.
    i use a sony alpha a300 and edit my pictures in photoshop cs4
    thanks :)


    http://i885.photobucket.com/albums/ac56/photographyfletch09/sunsett-1.gif
    on holiday in portugal on golf course.




    http://i885.photobucket.com/albums/ac56/photographyfletch09/converse-1.gif
    one of my favourites! :)





    http://i885.photobucket.com/albums/ac56/photographyfletch09/Flower-and-bee-1.gif
    in my back garden. lol






    http://i885.photobucket.com/albums/ac56/photographyfletch09/DSC01838-1.gif
    went to lytham :) the sea is quite dark in the background, ruins it abit :/





    http://i885.photobucket.com/albums/ac56/photographyfletch09/DSC00826-1.gif
    in my garden, again! lol





    http://i885.photobucket.com/albums/ac56/photographyfletch09/DSC00801-1.gif
    and again, in my garden :) lol





    comment what you think, be honest! lol
     
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    o hey tyler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I was just thinking the same thing. Personally from the pov from another 14yo, i find them really cool.. not something i'd think of taking in some of the ipctures.

    i'd like to see them re-saved as good quality JPG's :thumbup:
     
  4. Derrel

    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    I thought the heart made of the shoe strings on the tennis shoes was clever,and thought that the first landscape shot showed potential. I not too long ago went to the state fair and looked at the 14 and under photography exhibits; you are doing as well,or better than, many of your peers here in the USA.

    The rough color quality though was a bit jarring.
     
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    i absolutely love the converse and the tractor shots. i think inadvertently saving them as gifs really made the color get character that it would otherwise have not had (other than by post processing them to make them specifically look that way).
     
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    fokker No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    The shoe one is good - the quote looks a bit tacky to me but it did make me understand the photo which I wouldn't have otherwsie. Maybe a nicer scripted font and/or a dfifferent layout would imrove it a bit?
     
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    very good converse, but the others are too ruined from the gif compression. save them in jpg (in fine quality) and post again ;)
     
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    i really like the first 2,,, dont care much for the last four.

    the garden shots look like either the focus was missed or it was over processed in photoshop.

    the tractor and boat look like its got good potential, just a little over processed for my liking.

    mmmkay, now the good stuff:

    i could actualy see the first one as a golf add. if you could clone the one green flare in the bottom right out of the picture, it would be perfect.

    i love the composition of the second one and the saying is clever, but would benefit from a different font
     
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    Joves No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I too love the Converse one and, the first garden shot has potential. It may look much better in jpg as others have said. On the by the sea shot, what did you meter off of? I would also take the two boats out with the clone tool as well. That would keep the foreground objects as the focus.
     

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