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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Tyjax, Aug 14, 2003.

  1. Tyjax

    Tyjax TPF Noob!

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    Nikon N5005
    Car for tripod (notice distortion)
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    4sec esposure
    No flash
    Fujichrome

    PS - Extreme crop, burnin details removed electric line from upper extrem left. I will post original if you like.
    edit - btw, this is a very low res save. The originals were 10 meg tiff's so I dumped them to a quick jpeg and ended up shooting too low on size. Arrg.
    I desire critique.
     
  2. oriecat

    oriecat work in progress

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    I really like the warm color and the slight tilt. The fence thingy at the bottom bothers me though. I think it would bother me less if it was in focus, but I'm not sure about that. As is, it just really draws my eye down there away from where I want to be looking. Please do post the uncropped so we can see what you've chosen to do with it!
     
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    The problem with cropping the whole fence was that arching thing that extends half way up the door. with no fram of refrence it would be annoying.
     
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    Yes, I agree that you can't crop that much out. I definitely really like the crop you chose.
     
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    I like the composition, I think I like it in B&W though.
     

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