I just started shooting people a few months ago and have been practicing nearly everyday. I was able to hook up with this young lady, Lisa Marie, who is an aspiring model and was willing to give up a few hours of her time so I could so what I could do this past weekend I am not thrilled with the shots. I almost didn't post anything here because I know these aren't great but.... I can't get better if I don't know what I need to do. I have posted some pretty awful stuff in the past. Hopefully this is better. I am not trying to become a pro but I want to be a competent amateur. I would appreciate your input. What would you do differently? I need help with lights, posing, and pp. This is the shot I consider the best in the set. Hit me, I can take it.