1st. new shoot in Months - NSFW

DanOstergren · Jul 5, 2017

There are some areas that I think could use some selective color correction or reduced saturation, which could easily be done with layer masks over a selective color or hue/saturation adjustment layer. Otherwise good work.

These are some of the spots that jump out to me in needing correction:

Her neck in the 2nd shot:

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The shadow under her chest in the 4th shot:

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The underside of her arm in the last shot:

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Trever1t · Jul 5, 2017

Yeah, color cast from sunlight bouncing off the walls. To be honest I saw it and was ok with it but I suppose you're right and I oughta take it to the next level and hone my selective color editing skills, of which barely have a handle on.

Trever1t · Jul 6, 2017

Bump da bumps

JoeW · Jul 6, 2017

Lovely model, lovely work. I found the "green circle" (I know, green object that is rendered a circle given DoF) in photo #1 to be distracting. I also wish you'd cropped just slightly higher in most of the photos instead of just right above the knees...for some reason that bothers me. But otherwise, your work (as usual) is beautiful and your model is lovely. I hope she's up to shooting with you some more.

Trever1t · Jul 6, 2017

JoeW said:
Lovely model, lovely work. I found the "green circle" (I know, green object that is rendered a circle given DoF) in photo #1 to be distracting. I also wish you'd cropped just slightly higher in most of the photos instead of just right above the knees...for some reason that bothers me. But otherwise, your work (as usual) is beautiful and your model is lovely. I hope she's up to shooting with you some more.

Lol weird as this sounds I left the crop spacious so when posting to instagram it would fit, rather than create two versions.

Thanks Joe!

crimbfighter · Jul 6, 2017

She certainly has NOTHING to be ashamed or shy about! And neither do you, great images! Glad to see you make such a triumphant return!

gckless · Jul 13, 2017

I've been following you on Flickr for a little while, didn't know you were on here. Love your stuff. This girl is :drool:

! Great set, as mentioned she must have either been lying to you or really comfortable with you, because these look really natural and laid back.

I like the first one the best. The only thing, and I think someone mentioned it, is the bit of yellow in her neck. Still, my favorite image.

Trever1t · Jul 14, 2017

Thank you! I am told I'm fun to work with, Probably cause I'm relaxed and patient and full of praise

DGMPhotography · Jul 14, 2017

hamana hamana :eek-73:

Granddad · Jul 15, 2017

DanOstergren said:
There are some areas that I think could use some selective color correction or reduced saturation, which could easily be done with layer masks over a selective color or hue/saturation adjustment layer. Otherwise good work.

These are some of the spots that jump out to me in needing correction:

Her neck in the 2nd shot:

The shadow under her chest in the 4th shot:

The underside of her arm in the last shot:

Dan, Dan the DETAIL man!

Which is no doubt the reason your work is so outstanding.
I honestly didn't notice any of this stuff but now you pointed it out....