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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by feroxfotos, Jul 31, 2007.

  1. feroxfotos

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    "ISOLATION"
    Austin M. James

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    lets hope its not your last post!!! What a fantastic shot! Loving the noise
     
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    thank you very much. I've been looking all over for a good active photography forum to show my work. I think this site may be the one. Most forums have taken me about a week to get a reply.
     
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    Nice shot.. I like it
     
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    thank you. I think I may have overdone the noise level in the picture, maybe its just me though, I tried to make it just a very sharp, clean picture, but then it took away the atmosphere I was going for.
     
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    Hi ferexfotos.

    What I like, the composition. You have just enough information of the subject.

    I like the dirty-ness of the floor and surrounding and that you chose to shoot nude.

    I'm not sure I get isolation from this because the surroundings are so light.

    The highlights in the curtain are blown out which draws my eye away from your subject.

    The structure in the lower left also distracts.
     
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    ahh, thats probably what i need to fix. I tried to fix the curtain, but I couldnt figure out how to make it dissapear or distract less. And as for the thing in the left hand corner, idk what that is haha...

    ill give another shot at cutting those out
     

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