I have been wanting to start doing more portraits and senior pictures shots and realized when I started trying a couple of months ago how much more there is to know. I have been reading and watching tutorials since Nov. I bought a couple of softboxes and backdrops and got my lovely wife to pose for me this past week. I had a slave flash through an umbrella at camera left at about 10 oclock and one at camera right about 5 o'clock. My 580ex II was set at 1/16th (I think) and turned 90 degrees right to fire the slave. I have so far to go. I am trying to get more depth in the shots and quit making everyone look flat so I played with light placement here. I feel like I got the focus right on her eyes, got the catchlight I used Lightroom, adjusted white bal, exposure, adjusted clarity and added a little vibrance. Even so, this this shot did not blow me away, what does it need? Pose? Change lights? different background? shoot the photographer? I would really appreciate your suggestions. Thanks.