1st portrait session results!!! C & C Pretty please

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  1. eilla05

    eilla05 TPF Noob!

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    Yes I know there are a lot on here but I wanted to show a few different images that I shot. There are PLENTY more!

    Please C & C me. I am looking for all feedback dealing with exposure poses etc.

    Thanks in advance!

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  2. Robin Usagani

    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    #1 is my fav.
    #3 WB is a little off and something is sticking out from the left.

    I guess my biggest comment is the cropping. How are you planning to print these? The aspect ratio are so random. I always try to get 2:3 aspect ratio.
     
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    I actually print with a place that does not crop your photos, having said that these are just for my website. The ones I give to the person are not cropped as tight to take into account the cropping that most printing places do :) Thanks for your feedback! I really do appreciate it.
     
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    I really like #1. So different and the colors are GREAT! I love bright pictuers!

    #2 is great too, but be careful when shooting where they look like heads growing out of the grass with no legs.

    I think I commented on your watermark before or your name, but if said fast, it is not going to come out right.... Love of the WHAT??? lol
     
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    they are very nice i like them
     
  6. eilla05

    eilla05 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks and yeah you did! It is just kinda stuck now :lol:
     
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    Thanks!:D
     
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    OrionsByte No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I love #1 but I think I'd have taken her necklace off first, because my eye was drawn directly to the large stone on her temple.

    I think there's a bit too much empty space to the right in #3, and whatever is sticking out of the grass behind him could be cloned out.

    Very nice work, I like them all!
     
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    #2 is GREAT whilst #3 could use a little fill lighting . Great poses/captures
     
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    #1 was totally spur of the moment, she did it and I shot it there was no thinking! I supposed I could have asked her to take it off and shoot it again but im okay that it is 100% real ;)

    Yeah I need to work on to number 3 as it is cropped (cutting two people out) on the left side.

    Overall Im so happy that I was able to even capture their memories in a good way :lol:
     
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    I LOVE #1 - great color and interesting shot

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