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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Buzaglo, Jan 16, 2007.

  1. Buzaglo

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    Nice shot with the vibrant colors. I would like to see a tighter crop. Maybe a vertical 4x6?
     
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    I do think there is something to say about the tighter crop. Nice job.
     
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    Hmmm, I'm in doubt. Maybe crop just one person on the left? I think in #1 the DOF and the framing really help to bring out the colours. But in the crop, suddenly the colour looks too fake.


    but eh...nice shot!




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    Hiya Buzaglo (or Max, for that matter ;)) and welcome to ThePhotoForum! :D

    Now those are some striking colours here!
    Is it a self-portrait?

    When I saw the first, uncropped version, also my initial thought was: crop. Too centred.

    A vertical crop is one idea ... though my immediate idea, even before I had scrolled enough to reach your vertical crop solution, also was to stay with the horizontal but crop in from the left and above... as to move this colourful ski-er out of the centre but to keep some background. Maybe!?!?
     
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    Thanks guys,
    No, it is one of my friends from Israeli snowboarding team.
    And colors are real never corrected.
     
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    nice shot
    what equipment?
     
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