1st senior portrait job...

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  1. Quok1mb0

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    this is my little brothers girlfriend, and my first senior portraits job...treated them like any other portraits, but they are for her senior pictures...so yeah what you think?

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    The Laura 07 was put in for her just disregard it...
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    was messing around with photoshop and she loved this and I thought it looked cool so yeah...
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    ok laters!
     
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    OMG I'm jealous! I so love these and I KNOW she does!!!! Nice JOB!
     
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    Oh yeah I forgot to ask what lighting did you use - if you dont mind telling that is... these are too cool. By the way I like the last one a lot it's neato!
     
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    the only lighting i used was my speedlight...and a poster board to bounce lights where i wanted to...

    thank you very much! :)
     
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    Numer 3 and 4 are very good!
    She, or some of you, seems to be a hairdresser, right???
     
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    she is in the process of becoming a hair dresser...

    thank you much!
     
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    Oh thank you for letting me know about the lighting, I'l have to keep it in mind. Again.. good job!
     
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    I have no business critiquing photos but I would like to see more of the color in her eyes. I learned that if you place a small light behind and above you it will cause her pupils to close tighter and shouldn't influence your exposure.
     
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    Very nice shots. I like the second to last one the most. :thumbup:
     
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    #1 makes me nervous. If she slipped *gasp*!!!
    #4 is my favorite. She's gorgeous and her spunky and fun personality is very obvious in all of them.
    The last one is super fun. My photoshop 'experiments' never turn out this nice. The only that bugs me is the back of her arm. I assume it's from a bit of redness but it looks like orange peels (if you know what I mean) I'd suggest cleaning it up a bit.

    Great job.
     
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    I like them all but #4.
    In #4 her foot is cut off.
     
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    I don't have a favorite because I love them all so much!!!!! You did an awesome job on these!!!!!!!!!
     

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