1st Senior shoot C&C welcome

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  1. P3 Photography

    P3 Photography TPF Noob!

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    1. pp too much?
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  2. robertwsimpson

    robertwsimpson No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    The expressions in the 2nd and 3rd are just uncomfortable looking to me. I'd toss them.
     
  3. KmH

    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    #1. Yes, to much skin smoothing. Looks plastic.

    #2. Light to close to the lens axis (no facial modeling, looks flat). The position of her right arm makes it look like she's holding a P&S and making a self portrait.

    #3 nice lighting. The leading line of the umbrella handle draws the viewers eye away from her and up into the umbrella.

    #4 the pose accentuates her paunch which is not very flattering. The pose also seems to make her arms look more plump too.

    In all 4 having the shoulders square, or nearly square to the camera detracts from her femininity, IMO.
     
  4. Derrel

    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

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    ^^^ Yup...KmH's evaluation of all four photos is pretty much spot-on. None of these are really flattering to this young woman.
     

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