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  1. skier06

    skier06 TPF Noob!

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    Hello everyone,
    Im new to the forums here and relatively new to photography in general.
    this particular subject is something i just yesterday decided to give a go to see if its something i have an eye for at all so i appreciate any and all feedback
    thanks
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  2. Josh220

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    #1 I had to look at it for a few seconds before I realized it was her shoulder on the right. I thought it was a deformed breast at first glance.

    #2 I don't like the "squished" look.

    Are these self portraits or of someone you know? If so, try to re-compose the shots and post up your re-do's here.
     
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    I don't know, I think the "flaw" in the first one is what makes it interesting - Depends what you're after I suppose.
     
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    ouch! bummer:(
    they are of my gf actually so we will give it another go. i wasnt sure what i was after really....she was just on her side so i asked her to try to keep the bottom half up and lay her shoulders back......we never noticed the "deformity"
    thanks for your comments guys:thumbup:
     
  5. Josh220

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    I don't know if I would say it's bad. I just wanted to point out it took me a few seconds to realize that it was her shoulder. If you are satisfied with that, then it's fine. I just wanted to point it out.
     
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    its cool Josh:thumbup:.....thats why im here....we were there so we see it differently of course. thanks for the comments, we need the outside perspective
     
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    hell i like it cause its showing tits lol j/k the pics are good.
     
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    Skier, is she opposed to showing more of her body than her breasts?
     
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    The first picture rules IMO
     
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    glad somebody likes it :thumbup:
     
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    Anymore shots?
     
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    I liked the first one too and I like cause it took me a few seconds to figure out what I was looking at! to me it makes it more interesting!
     

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