2 Flower Pics! Kinda Big!

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  1. SlySniper

    SlySniper TPF Noob!

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    Hello!

    Well, heres a picture of a rose near my house. I tried to get it at an angle, which I kinda did, but, it seems every time I do I get some shawdow from the pedals. Do you guys think it would be better shawdow-less?

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    ALSO!

    What do you think about this photo? Do you like how only one flower is brighter than the rest? Or not?

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    Thanks for all the help! :)
     
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    i'm not a big flower-photo fan but i do say i quite like them.
    about the shadow, i think it would look very artificial without it.
    oh, and in the second, i think the flower isn't in focus. can you umm fix that (reshoot)?
     
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    Thanks!

    I'll be back in 10 minutes with another picture of that flower, focused.
     
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    lol, u do that! :D i'm really curious how it'll look.
     
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    WELL, I tried to be back in 10 minutes, but I guess not. :(

    Well, I tried to get the same effect, but, I couldn't. It was too bright outside.

    But, I got one that kinda looks like it.

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    I'll get a better one when the suns starts setting.
     
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    AAARGH!!! I hate ie!!! it just deleted all i said! Well, let me resume my words, it's better that way :D i agree that the second is not as good. but still don't see crispness , and the second one is blurrier even on the petals.

    question: why can you not get that center piece in focus. i mean that is what i meant, because the petals are so clear and nice as opposed to the center which is an amalgamous mix of yellow and dark yellow :)

    anyway, don't really take my critique for more than an oppinion on this,i told you, i'm not a big fan of flower photos...
     

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