2 from the park today C&C welcome

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by DanFinePhotography, Sep 6, 2010.

  1. DanFinePhotography

    DanFinePhotography TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 13, 2010
    Messages:
    680
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Redmond, OR
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Was a beautiful day here in Central Oregon went to a local park and a few places in town got tons of pics today. A couple of my favorites. Any feedback is always more than welcome.

    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]
     
  2. AgentDrex

    AgentDrex No longer a newbie, moving up!

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2008
    Messages:
    2,837
    Likes Received:
    405
    Location:
    Bemidji, Minnesota, USA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    wb is off in first one...and her eyes are looking at an empty spot which is where I find my own eyes drifting...work on the composition a little more

    duck's head is underexposed...perhaps clone out the extraneous fluff to the top-right of the duck...

    Keep working on your composition...nothing else matters until you get that down pat...

    Looking forward to seeing more photos from you...
     
  3. DanEitreim

    DanEitreim TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 5, 2010
    Messages:
    92
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Orange, California
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I agree with AgentDrex's comments.
     
  4. bigtwinky

    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2008
    Messages:
    4,820
    Likes Received:
    285
    Location:
    Montreal
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    There is more to just the wb being off in #1. The face seems pixelated or splotchy.
    the image is also pretty noisy for something shot during the bright sun.

    The duck is under exposed and the composition leaves some dead space on the left top of the frame. Dead space can help an image, but you need to be careful how much is put in and where.

    There also seems to be quite a bit of dust...clean the sensor lately?
     
  5. misstwinklytoes

    misstwinklytoes TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 13, 2010
    Messages:
    2,112
    Likes Received:
    40
    Location:
    Texas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I think 1 is oversaturated which is why it looks splotchy or whathaveyou.

    He just got the cam so I doubt it's dust.
    It sensor cleans with every turn off.
     
  6. misstwinklytoes

    misstwinklytoes TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 13, 2010
    Messages:
    2,112
    Likes Received:
    40
    Location:
    Texas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Scratch that. Someone else just got their cam and I'm a d0rk and was thinking of the wrong person.
     
  7. bigtwinky

    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2008
    Messages:
    4,820
    Likes Received:
    285
    Location:
    Montreal
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Agreed, your a dork. :lol::p
     
  8. misstwinklytoes

    misstwinklytoes TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jun 13, 2010
    Messages:
    2,112
    Likes Received:
    40
    Location:
    Texas
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Hardly the worst thing I've been called. ;)
     
  9. SrBiscuit

    SrBiscuit TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2008
    Messages:
    2,721
    Likes Received:
    44
    Location:
    NH
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    camera phone?
     
  10. AgentDrex

    AgentDrex No longer a newbie, moving up!

    Joined:
    Jan 27, 2008
    Messages:
    2,837
    Likes Received:
    405
    Location:
    Bemidji, Minnesota, USA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Are you calling misstwinklytoes a cameraphone? I would venture a guess that being called a "cameraphone" would be worse (if not stranger) than being called a dork...
     
  11. DanFinePhotography

    DanFinePhotography TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 13, 2010
    Messages:
    680
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Redmond, OR
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    Thanks guys, The camera is not new it's around 2 years old. I may check out something on how to clean the sensor or to have it done if needed. The dust on the duck photo is actually debris in the water (at least thats what it appeared to be to myself). Thanks for the comments ;)
     
  12. SrBiscuit

    SrBiscuit TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Apr 22, 2008
    Messages:
    2,721
    Likes Received:
    44
    Location:
    NH
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    :lol:indeed


    whats up with the first pic?...is that from some treatmoent done to it? it looks very odd.
     

Share This Page