2 photos for you to critique.

[teishu]

Hi guys, what do you think ?

1#
http://www.juphotography.co.uk/juphoto/main.php?g2_itemId=89

2# (Now black&white)
http://www.juphotography.co.uk/juphoto/main.php?g2_itemId=97http://www.juphotography.co.uk/juphoto/main.php?g2_itemId=93

 

[fragged3d]

I like the second one but I would cut some of the grass out of it so more attention is on the bench and tree.

 

[teishu]

thanks, i was aiming for siloette effect, didn't turn out quite as i wanted but it was the best out of the 5/6 i took.

 

[Trenton Romulox]

I really, really like the first one. The second one, I agree with fragged3d, you should crop so that the attention is on the bench and tree. Good work though.

 

[Revolucion]

yes , i like prefer the first one too. The second one is not so clear even if it's dark outside !

 

[Johnw7127]

I like the first one, but the bench is a little out of focus. As for the second, I think it's great, but is lacking in color, you might want to just make it black and white.

 

[teishu]

I like the first one, but the bench is a little out of focus. As for the second, I think it's great, but is lacking in color, you might want to just make it black and white.

thanks for all the comments, i might try B&W in a sec and post back.

 

[teishu]

ok 2# is now the b&w version..