2 photos for you to critique.

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  1. teishu

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    I like the second one but I would cut some of the grass out of it so more attention is on the bench and tree.
     
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    thanks, i was aiming for siloette effect, didn't turn out quite as i wanted but it was the best out of the 5/6 i took.
     
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    I really, really like the first one. The second one, I agree with fragged3d, you should crop so that the attention is on the bench and tree. Good work though.
     
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    yes , i like prefer the first one too. The second one is not so clear even if it's dark outside !
     
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    I like the first one, but the bench is a little out of focus. As for the second, I think it's great, but is lacking in color, you might want to just make it black and white.
     
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    thanks for all the comments, i might try B&W in a sec and post back.
     
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    ok 2# is now the b&w version..
     

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