2 pics for C&C

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  1. cletusjermal

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    What do you think?

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    The rose looks out of focus on here on my monitor. Does it looks like that to you too? It is in focus in photoshop and windows pic viewer. Must of been when i shrunk down the file size.
     
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    the rose is out of focus indeed
     
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    Yeah the rose is OOF
     
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    get closer to the subjects. you'll find the photos will become more appealing
     
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    Why is everyone calling that a rose? Isn't it a lily? I'm no botanist though..

    I like that you put it in a sculpture wooden hand thing, that's more thought than most people put into a photo.
     
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    Thanks for the tip. Ill have to get a macro lense to get closer.
     
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    1- The flower is out of focus. Make sure you were not too close to it as lenses have a minimal focusing distance. I'm also not liking the angle from top down, trying moving around and taking 8-10 pictures in all different angles.

    2- I also like the idea of the sculpture holding the flower, nice touch
    I'm not really liking the overall lighting, looks like you used the popup flash. If you are having issues with slow shutterr, then use a tripod or something to steady the image. Same comments on the center composition not being appealing
     
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    The rose is up there now. I tried to reupload it and see if it would stay in focus but didnt work.
     
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    I was messing around with off centering it but i didnt like all the dead space that created. Any sugestions?
     
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    AH! Now I see the rose.. sorry.

    I like the darkness of this a lot, it would be a nice photo if you got the focus right.
     
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    This one is in better focus. I uploaded it again.

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