2x PP C&C!

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  1. Kofman13

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    the second one I like very emotional
     
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    I agree thanks!
     
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    I like the both. #2 I agree with er111a. But for #1 I think I'd like a crop that cut out some of the dead space on the left.
     
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    The 1st has a busy/uninteresting background in my opinion. The head is cut off too, which is probably not the best. The shot had potential I guess, if it was composed better.

    I like the 2nd one, it is interesting and composed well.

    Hope this helps. :thumbup:
     
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    Haha thanks. Ya I agree about the first. It was just a random snapshot hanging out with friends it caught my eye though.. There was no real composition involved

    Second one was more thought out :)
     

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